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Stuart J. Whitmore

crenel@books.theunseen.city

Joined 3 years, 6 months ago

Reader whenever I can make time, self-published writer whenever I can muster the energy.

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Review of "Summary of Richard Hargreaves's the Germans in Normandy" on 'Goodreads'

"Every one of the infantry divisions in France in 1944 relied first and foremost on the horse for transport. The horse pulled field guns, ammunition wagons, anti-tank guns; horse-drawn vehicles in Normandy outnumbered their powered counterparts two to one in the summer of 1944. The poorest divisions in France that year even lacked horses." That they were relying so much on horses, against the machines of the Allied forces, was just one of many eye-openers in this book. As even the Allied forces at the time understood, the outcome might have been very different if Germany had been adequately prepared for the invasion, instead of facing it after being weakened through years of war.

Like other books that deal with the bloody, gritty reality of war, this is a book I wish would be "mandatory reading" for politicians. This book, in particular, should be read by anybody who fails to …

Krista D. Ball: What Kings Ate and Wizards Drank (Paperback, 2013, Tyche Books Ltd.)

Review of 'What Kings Ate and Wizards Drank' on 'Goodreads'

My main review is on Amazon, but in brief, I will say that this was a fun and informative read. I shared many tidbits with my family, and I'll be able to use the information (and overall food-awareness) I've gained from it to improve my works-in-progress.

Mark Berent: Rolling Thunder (Paperback, 2004, I Books)

Review of 'Rolling Thunder' on 'Goodreads'

If you want a close peek at the brutal daily experiences of those the US sent on its misadventure in Vietnam, this historical novel will give you that, with a detailed focus on the air aspect of the war (especially regarding those who flew the F-100 and F-105). Politicians inclined to "send in our military" without clear objectives and exit strategies should be forced to read this book and others like it.

However, the book itself needs significant editing to clean up errors like missing punctuation and incorrect word choice, and some revision to help the story flow would help too.

Joseph Rhea: Novum : Genesis (Paperback, 2013, CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform)

Review of 'Novum : Genesis' on 'Goodreads'

I enjoyed Novum and would like to read more as the series develops. This first story gives a good introduction to the characters and setting, all of which seemed to be designed well with enough complexity to be interesting and believable without drowning the reader in too much detail. The character motivations are sound, as are interactions among them. There's enough to this book that it is a complete story, but it also leaves open enough conflict that there is plenty of room for story development, and the conflicts are important enough to leave you wanting to know how they are resolved.