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Robert O. Paxton: The Anatomy of Fascism (EBook, 2007, Vintage) 4 stars

It is wrong, however, to construct a kind of intellectual teleology that starts with the fascist movement and reads backwards, selectively, rounding up every text or statement that seems to be pointing toward it.

The Anatomy of Fascism by  (Page 149)

New word: teleology

Philosophy: the explanation of phenomena in terms of the purpose they serve rather than of the cause by which they arise

reviewed A Fatal Grace by Louise Penny (Chief Inspector Gamache, #2)

Louise Penny: A Fatal Grace (EBook, 2007, Minotaur Books) 3 stars

Uses some deceptive writing techniques

3 stars

Chief Inspector Gamache returns to Three Pines, where a person universally disliked, C.C. de Poitiers has been murdered in elaborate fashion in front of a crowd watching a curling match.

Unfortunately, the author used a technique i detest, so this will be the final book i read in the series. On at least three occasions we're following along in the mind of a character, but to keep the suspense going leaves out crucial thoughts.

"Her cell phone rang. She hesitated, knowing who it was, and not wanting to leave her last thought."

So, despite getting visibility into the character's thoughts, suddenly she doesn't think of the name of who is calling? Of course not, but the author doesn't want to let us into the scheme just yet. Rather than write from a different point of view or work around this limitation, she just leaves the thought out. And does this …

quoted A Fatal Grace by Louise Penny (Chief Inspector Gamache, #2)

Louise Penny: A Fatal Grace (EBook, 2007, Minotaur Books) 3 stars

"I don't mind tea," Clara raised her mug to them, "even tisane, but I hate to think what goes into the one Mother offers each year."

A Fatal Grace by  (Chief Inspector Gamache, #2) (Page 176)

New word: tisane

(Archaic) a medicinal drink or infusion, originally one made with barley. (The word became rare until reintroduced from French in the 20th century.)

Thomas W. Jones: Mastering Genealogical Documentation (EBook, 2017, National Genealogical Society) 4 stars

The value of your family history research relies in large part on the thoroughness and …

Frustrating but useful

4 stars

I found Mastering Genealogical Documentation to be very very frustrating, but ultimately it was very useful. The author says this book is a textbook, whereas Evidence Explained is a reference work. To some degree that's true.

Despite having read Genealogy Standards a few times, I've clearly missed some important points. That's mostly because Genealogy Standards does not include discussion of the standards. I read a lot of technical standards for a living. BCG's Genealogy Standards leave a lot to be desired for explanation.

That's a preface to the first really good point about Mastering Genealogical Documentation: it's an extensive discussion and breakdown of BCG standard 5, which lays out the 5 facets/elements/components of a citation: who, what, where, when, and wherein. What satisfies as good information for each element? Thomas W. Jones answers that. (Evidence Explained really does not.)

The second really good thing about Mastering Genealogical Documentation is that …

Thomas W. Jones: Mastering Genealogical Documentation (EBook, 2017, National Genealogical Society) 4 stars

The value of your family history research relies in large part on the thoroughness and …

Or example 3:

Chapter 4 is "Assembling Components into Clear Citations". The lede is "Genealogy standard 5 […] says that reference-list citations describe at least four aspects of sources. It also says that full reference-note citations […] describe those four aspects and one more."

Is the author going to tell you what those aspects are? Well, yes. But only after 2 sections with 17 paragraphs of admonitions to research sources & be brief.

That entire 1st section of chapter 4 would be much better placed after explaining the aspects. The author could then explain how researching is necessary for each aspect.

The section honestly feels like someone complaining about how people don't research sources and they should.

Thomas W. Jones: Mastering Genealogical Documentation (EBook, 2017, National Genealogical Society) 4 stars

The value of your family history research relies in large part on the thoroughness and …

Or example 2:

The section on reference notes includes lots of rules for how to construct reference notes. The text does not include any examples of the individual rules applied to citations. The author realizes he needs examples, so he adds a perfunctory "Reference-note citations appear in footnotes throughout this books..." toward the end.

That's piss-poor textbook writing. You're telling students "here's all the rules, but go elsewhere to see how to apply them and connect them yourself."

Thomas W. Jones: Mastering Genealogical Documentation (EBook, 2017, National Genealogical Society) 4 stars

The value of your family history research relies in large part on the thoroughness and …

I'm going to get a bit complainy about the construction of this text. Some of this may be duplicated in my eventual review. Because this could be so much better written & organized.

For example:

In chapter 3, the book describes three settings for citations:: reference notes, source labels, and reference lists. Then the text states "reference notes & source labels have similar purposes" and "reference lists have a distinctly different purpose".

What purposes? The reader has to go read later sections to find those out. That's the sort of thing that should be in this intro/summary for a textbook.

Len Deighton: The Ipcress File (Hardcover, 1988, The Franklin Library) 3 stars

Len Deighton's classic first novel, whose protagonist is a nameless spy – later christened Harry …

Too hard to follow

2 stars

Harry Palmer is transferred from British military intelligence to another shadowy department. And pretty much everything that happened between then and the big explanation at the end was too confusing.

There's a kidnapping in Lebanon. A visit to an American Pacific island military base. Some running around London. And lots and lots of coffee, tea, and genteel drinks. None of it making any sense at the time.

Len Deighton: The Ipcress File (Hardcover, 1988, The Franklin Library) 3 stars

Len Deighton's classic first novel, whose protagonist is a nameless spy – later christened Harry …

The polo, the pigsticking, the punitive actions against the tribesmen who enjoyed the fighting as much as the young English aristocrats did, the sun, horses galloping in the open hill country, drinks and mess dinners, and other young subalterns wrecking the mess in horseplay — all these things were things of his father's life, and when his father died he immediately asked for a posting to another unit.

The Ipcress File by  (Page 78)

New word: pigsticking

the sport of hunting wild boar with a spear, typically on horseback