I noticed so many Harry Potter parallels that i started to doubt my perception, because the world and setup of this book is quite different and everything. But I mostly thought they were fine because they are so messy that they seem a bit satirical.

Sadly there were a few things that really didn't sound convincing to me, from minor logistical details to big character motivations.

Also, why does the Greenwild do nation states?

But it's sweet, I like the world and the atmosphere.