I have a few more minor rambling thoughts about Litany for a Broken World too, which I'll separate out into this comment.
This is my own fault for coming into a book with expectations, but the blurb I read focuses on three strangers. I was thus a bit surprised that all nine major characters in the book (including the dog!) get their own point of view chapters, and this jumping around didn't quite work for me as a reader. It felt a bit unfocused to me, but maybe it worked well for some other reader. Additionally, Harnett getting his own chapter also removed some of the ambiguity around Jace and Corinne's conflict. It would have been more effective for me to have him be a bit of an enigma (and fill in his backstory later, if needed).
Jace and Corinne's conflict was really intriguing to me, but I …
I have a few more minor rambling thoughts about Litany for a Broken World too, which I'll separate out into this comment.
This is my own fault for coming into a book with expectations, but the blurb I read focuses on three strangers. I was thus a bit surprised that all nine major characters in the book (including the dog!) get their own point of view chapters, and this jumping around didn't quite work for me as a reader. It felt a bit unfocused to me, but maybe it worked well for some other reader. Additionally, Harnett getting his own chapter also removed some of the ambiguity around Jace and Corinne's conflict. It would have been more effective for me to have him be a bit of an enigma (and fill in his backstory later, if needed).
Jace and Corinne's conflict was really intriguing to me, but I feel like the resolution fizzled. There's betrayal, mistrust, and ambiguity about the nature of the Network, RDD, and Harnett. But then there's a moment during the climax, where Harnett repeats the facts that Corinne believes (as far as I could tell), and Corinne suddenly wonders "is this actually true?" without much reason at all. It didn't feel like a believable moment of doubt to me.
Finally, I do love a multiverse story, but I wish a little that there had been more explanation or differentiation in the other worlds. I don't know that they quite felt that different or unique. Is the handwave at "you can't travel to any world that's too close" the way that you don't meet your own self in another world? Mostly I have just seen a number of stories doing this sort of thing, and so I'm intrigued about the mechanics of this universe. This book just doesn't really get into any of them.





